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Bright
Sunday morning of November. The golden sun rays
reflected from his forehead while his short
bright silver hair still up and brilliantine,
was matching with his milky dhoti-kurta. As
usual, a gamchcha (a traditional towel) on his
right shoulder approached the PWD Bridge where a
falconer was waiting for his customer to sell
dozens of birds. Some of them sang really well
which tempted him to and perhaps that was the
reason he came out of his living room.
‘You should be in the blue sky and the sky has
no limit’ and he asked the falconer to release
all the caged birds.
‘Hamaar layee-ka log kaa khaii, maa-lik, (What
shall my children eat, sir),' said the falconer.
He paused thoughtfully. He never meant that
falconer would eat the birds. Else, what shall
he eat if not the birds? The gravity of the
paradox was a serious social problem. People die
of starvation.
‘Yes, what will your children eat if you free
the birds’, he said turning his head.
His eyes were still fixed with the chirping wild
yellowish sparrows. Some of them were half
asleep or probably half dead whose timid eyes
weren’t glowing that much. He did mind the
comforts of the birds. He got his eyes fixed
with them for a considerable time. They said a
lot and got the impression that they won’t be in
the cage any more. As such, the chorus got a
higher pitch...
Busy station road was less crowded. There wasn’t
any encroachment on the other side of the road.
The abandoned football ground and a huge jamun
tree just down the railway station could be
easily seen by the passersby and the arrival –
departure of the trains was a fun for the
children especially when the eastern bound
trains would give a look of half circle while
crossing the bridge over Jharahi river of Mairwa
Dhaam.The release of black smoke from the steam
engine would cover the surroundings with a thick
black line up the railway track. That was a
regular fascination for the local children.
Rickshaw pullers were seen but very few of them
passed lazy either smoking local made bidis or
ringing the bells of the rickshaw fitted with
handle bars. Small dhabas were serving breakfast
to those who were used to and preferred
litti-ghoogni on disposable banana leaves - made
plates dressed with tea in clay pot.
Genalal, Ramdaras and Radheyshayam, the
immediate neighbors approached the PWD Bridge on
the station road where the negotiation was on.
They were peeping through the netted wires of
the cage on the restless chirping birds. Genalal
and Ramdaras murmured but could be guessed that
they were talking about the size and weight of
the birds. But confused Radheyshayam was not
being able to conceptualize the idea about the
ongoing negotiation. Still, his eyes narrated
something. His scary eyes didn’t stop dreaming
which was not realized by others.
Certainly, he might be thinking of the birds’
unprecedented lives, I thought… his cocksureness
of being a vegetarian was his strongest belief.
Eventually, his lips moved but inaudibly and
decided to leave the PWD Bridge to deal with a
few customers who were impatiently waiting for
him at his lime shop.
Here, the deal was on:
‘Ok rupees fifty…’
‘Pachaas rupiya se kaa hoii maharaj… (what shall
rupees fifty do…)?’
‘Aazadi ke kono dam hola…? (Freedom can’t be
priced)’.
Matter settled after an offer of some more
money, but how much - the onlookers could not
guess. He offered the money secretly with a
closed hand to the falconer though susceptible
of uncertainty on the deal; his raised eye-brow
was saying something, Perhaps his commitment…!
He got hold of the cage and raised it up for a
closure look on the birds. Compassionate and
glittering eyes talked a lot with them where
utmost fragrance of wild happiness was obvious
to them..
‘O! Your destination… your destinations… go
…go!’
That enchantment of freedom was heard like hymns
by the onlookers. But the cacophony and buzzing
were irresistible to them.
‘He is really too old’, someone whispered.
‘Din-wan nagi-chaa gail-baa (his death is
nearing)’, said other while going away.
Awe stuck falconer glared at him sarcastically.
He wanted to utter something… he folded his
sharp small knife and prepared himself to leave,
saying: ‘Achcha chala-taani Baboo. Phero aaeb
(Now, I take my leave, Sir. I will come again)’
‘Salaam!!’ He responded with.
The serenity on his face was clear. He was
confident of something. That something, perhaps,
was inexpressible to me. The smile on his lips
could be seen. Nevertheless, I found him
extremely happy as if a patient has recently
been discharged from the hospital from a long
illness. He didn’t like other’s happiness being
snatched for petty reasons particularly a pet’s
one. Living beings are not the tools of
happiness in the hands of might. He would say
this.
‘How can a bulbul sing in a cage?’ He paused…
‘Those days… those days…’ He regained his
confidence and walked down to get his room
located just under the peepal tree. That lush
green tree used to house hundreds and thousands
of birds on its wide stretched of big and small
branches, perching and twirling, they would
glare at him while seated on the old fashioned
wooden arm chair. That chorus by the birds was
his daily medicine that he used to take every
morning and evening.
‘To get our independence, we did sacrifice a
lot. And any sacrifice is not priceless.’
‘You are not going to school today?’ he asked
graciously.
‘Abba! My teacher has asked me to buy the
English text book… else he won’t allow me to sit
in the classes, I said weakly.
‘O! Yes! But how...? Those friends of mine have
flown away with the money!
(A Tribute to my father; breathed his last on 24
May 2004 in Patna).
शक्ति जो चेतन थी,
अब जड़ हो गयी है।
बचपन में जो कुंजी मेरे पास थी,
उम्र बढ़ते बढ़ते
वह कहीं खो गयी है।
- दिनकर
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Comments: |
Good one and well written touching
incident! - Nawin Kumar,
Charlotte, NC - May 25, 2007
Thanks for posting this true story.
This is the true story for everyone,
in our hearts we know this is true,
but are afraid of speaking out
innocent words in a seemingly much
practical world.
I remember a similar incident when I
was walking to go the high school
when I saw a fisherman pulling his
net out of the pond. There was just
one fish that came, and happened to
land some steps in front of me,
dancing with pain. While the
fisherman was preparing for the next
round, I couldn't tolerate it - and
threw it back in the water. Seeing
this, the fisherman got angry with
me, specially because he thought it
was inauspicious - he may not be
able to net much fish that day. That
was his first catch of the day and
even that was gone. After facing his
anger I was not certain if I did the
right thing, however I felt happy
that I had the guts to follow the
heart.
Personally, I am opting chains
rather than freedom, for the sake of
kids. My wife has Obsessive
Compulsive Disorder (OCD) syndrome,
and will not accept it - and hence
will not get treated. She has become
the master of our home, or else none
of us will obey her orders for
extra-cleanliness. Any topic
ultimately drills down to the fact
that something is not clean enough.
Few days back she and kids went to
India on vacation, and I am enjoying
every minute of this new-found but
short lived freedom. Irrespective of
freedom being priceless, I am opting
for the kids rather than my personal
freedom. I guess any sane and
responsible person would do the
same. - Vishwas Prem - May 27,
2007
When I was a boy of fourteen, my
father was so ignorant I could
hardly stand to have the old man
around. But when I got to be
twenty-one, I was astonished at how
much he had learned in seven years.
-Mark Twain
In other words, the more a man knows
his father, the more he'd
appreciate. - Kumod Jha - May 27,
2007
Is it a story or an biography? I
could understand only one thing, all
great men have great father. Even if
they are not, they are made great by
the power of pen.
The author is quite busy portraying
his father as freedom-loving, kind
and nature-lover. But, the story
draws grey picture of the person who
is ignorant or careless about his
son's book but using his money in
freeing the birds which would have
been caught again and sold.
Another question arises here, are
the author's family members strictly
vegetarian, I am sure, they are not,
then how they were able to cut the
throat of live chicken, fry it and
gulp big pieces. Couldn't they see
the sorrow and pain in the eyes of
the dying chicken.
I am not trying to turn down the
sentiments raised by the author
about freedom, but "KATHNI KARNI KA
FARQ" is the most dangerous social
evil of our society. We write pages
of good and high-thinking ideas but
go down with the old traditional way
of doing when it comes to bring the
same thoughts in their life.
At last, the story (or biography)
could come good in context of
Literature but not in terms of basic
human right, freedom. - Ravish
Kumar, Hyderabad - May 31, 2007 |
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